Part I Writing

Creation is the act or process of making something new. It is really important to the sustainable development of human society. To put it another way, it is at the heart of the development of our society.

With the accelerated pace of our society's development, creation matters enormously to the whole range of human endeavor, and is bound to make a difference in our modern life. What's more, creation is crucial to the success of any business. It can help businesses stay competitive by differentiating themselves from their rivals.

Taking into account the importance of creation, we should take measures to encourage creative spirit and this can be done in several ways. First of all, an environment should be made in every field of our society, in which people are encouraged to share ideas, contribute to decision-making and think independently. Secondly, people in the workplace who offer creative initiatives should be publicly acknowledged and rewarded. Lastly, schools and universities should develop students' creative ability in our young generation by adjusting curriculum and organizing social activities.

創(chuàng)造是創(chuàng)建新事物的行動(dòng)或過(guò)程。它對(duì)人類社會(huì)的可持續(xù)發(fā)展相當(dāng)重要。換句話說(shuō)，創(chuàng)造是我們社會(huì)發(fā)展的關(guān)鍵。

隨著我們社會(huì)發(fā)展步伐的加快，創(chuàng)造對(duì)人類致力發(fā)展的所有領(lǐng)域都十分重要，而且它注定影響我們的現(xiàn)代生活。另外，創(chuàng)造對(duì)任何企業(yè)的成功都至關(guān)重要。它可以幫助企業(yè)從競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手中脫穎而出，使其保持競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。

考慮到創(chuàng)造的重要性，我們應(yīng)采取措施，通過(guò)幾個(gè)方式來(lái)鼓勵(lì)創(chuàng)造精神。首先，我們應(yīng)該在社會(huì)各個(gè)領(lǐng)域創(chuàng)建鼓勵(lì)人們分享觀點(diǎn)、參與決策和獨(dú)立思考的環(huán)境。其次，有首創(chuàng)精神的職場(chǎng)人士應(yīng)得到公眾認(rèn)可和公開(kāi)嘉獎(jiǎng)。最后，中小學(xué)和高校應(yīng)通過(guò)調(diào)整課程設(shè)置和組織社會(huì)活動(dòng)來(lái)培養(yǎng)年輕一代的創(chuàng)造能力。

要點(diǎn)用法

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. Creation is the act or process of making something new.

開(kāi)篇用“創(chuàng)造”的定義引出“創(chuàng)造”這一主題。

2. It is really important to the sustainable development of human society. To put it another way, it is at the heart of the development of our society.

概述創(chuàng)造的重要性，為下一段具體展開(kāi)論述做鋪墊。

3. With the accelerated pace of our society's development, creation matters enormously to the whole range of human endeavor, and is bound to make a difference in our modern life. What's more, creation is crucial to the success of any business. It can help businesses stay competitive by differentiating themselves from their rivals.

具體論述創(chuàng)造對(duì)人類生活和企業(yè)的重要意義，符合題干要求。用with和what's more引出論述，銜接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。

4. Taking into account the importance of creation, we should take measures to encourage creative spirit and this can be done in several ways.

綜述采取措施的必要性，為下文具體展開(kāi)論述做鋪墊，符合題干要求。使用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章邏輯性。

5. First of all, an environment should be made in every field of our society... Secondly, people in the workplace... Lastly, schools and universities should develop students' creative ability...

從社會(huì)環(huán)境、獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)機(jī)制和學(xué)校課程設(shè)置三個(gè)方面具體闡述培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)造精神可采取的措施。用first of all, secondly和lastly分層次進(jìn)行論述，條理清楚，提出的建議有較強(qiáng)的可操作性。